Georgia’s 100WC

And go….. that was the starting point for the easter egg hunt. I’m Georgina and today I was in the woods with some of my friends for a easter egg hunt. We all split up to find some chocolate and after about 3 hours we all started to head back except for me ok, ok here is the rest of the story. So we are on an easter egg hunt blah, blah, blah and I suddenly stumbled upon a couch. The couch was really soft and looked brand new so I sat down but then I suddenly fell through and……

1 Comment on Georgia’s 100WC

  1. Sheila Speirs (Team 100wc)
    February 28, 2015 at 5:51 pm (4 years ago)

    You have punctuated each sentence well and added ellipses to introduce a pause. Could you look for opportunities to use a wider range of L5 punctuation appropriately? You have also successfully used an informal style with effective use of repetition.
    I do wonder what happened though…
    Great read! Thank you 🙂 ~ Mrs Speirs


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