Madison’s 100WC

He was shocked to find two blue eyes staring from a small white face.

“What on earth” said the Lord of Nulth?

The girl crept from the sack with a furry little body in her arms, “please sir, let him go to the night zoo” she whispered. “What is he?” he growled,” He is a monkey, sir” she said, “Please let him go to the night zoo” she begged.

Something in her whispering voice made him think, the child only wants this for the creature. His icy heart melted and the darkness left, the monkey got to the night zoo.

1 Comment on Madison’s 100WC

  1. Claire Radd
    November 23, 2014 at 4:30 pm (3 years ago)

    Hi there, Maddison,

    Well done for entering this week’s 100wc. I really enjoyed reading your entry – who would have thought that the Lord of Nulth had a soft side?

    I was really impressed with the range of synonyms you used for said. It helped to bring your writing to life. Your final sentence was great too!

    Well done, keep up the good work 🙂

    Mrs Radd (Team 100WC) Northamptonshire, England.


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