October 27

Taco’s 100 WC

“It’s broken, my green swimming cap,” I say to my mum, tears running down my cheeks, as I lift it up from the floor in two pieces. Ever since yesterday I have been so angry with my cat that ripped my green swimming cap in half. I feel a jab of fear too, when I have to face my dad and say that I’ve broken the old, green swimming cap. To get rid of the feeling of fear, I get out my art and craft set and start to glue it back together. I think to myself, will he notice?


Posted October 27, 2014 by baker2012 in category Uncategorized

1 thoughts on “Taco’s 100 WC

  1. Ms O'Keeffe (Team 100WC)

    Hi there
    I loved reading this 100 word challenge and I think you used the words very effectively to tell a very interesting story.You managed to express a wide range of emotions in your writing -anger, sadness and even fear. I think your ending was great as it left me wondering would your dad in fact notice. Well done. Great writing.
    Ms O’Keeffe (team 100wc)
    Ireland

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