Gee’s 100 WC

Swimming from end to end, I practise for hours every day in my backyard. Water flushes against my face, as I glide across the twenty-five metre distance. As I gently lift myself out of the cold water, my body hits the breezy air. I glance up, as I remove my green swimming cap and goggles. As I jump into the warmth of my towel, I feel my heart had broken while noticing a small cat stuck in a tree. I signal to the cat I was coming to the rescue and run off. Running across to the cat, I was stopped…

2 Comments on Gee’s 100 WC

  1. Mrs Boyce Team 100WC
    November 1, 2014 at 5:49 pm (3 years ago)

    Hi Gee,
    Thank you for entering this week’s 100 Word Challenge.
    I enjoyed reading your story.

    You have really engaged the reader as you have chosen some very powerful and effective words. You have also written clearly so we can easily follow the action. Well done! I’m left wondering what happened as you were running over to rescue the cat?
    Keep up the good work.

    I look forward to reading more adventures from you during the year.

    Mrs Boyce @ Team 100 WC
    Cork, Ireland

    Come and visit our Class Blog at http://kidblog.org/MrsBoycesClass-4/

    Reply
  2. Gee
    November 4, 2014 at 3:11 am (3 years ago)

    Thank you! I visited your Class Blog and it looks like you have some very talented writers!

    Reply

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