Jacob C’s 100 WC


“And another one bites the dust.” I can hear from down the street as the Jones boys start their neighborhood bulling trip for the weekend.

Doesn’t matter if you are good with come backs because they don’t taunt you they beat you down.

At school they said I was going down this weekend because I stood up for a kid a school.

I faced the music and walked outside to greet them, they grabbed me and carried me over to a sewer entrance and threw me in.

I could not believe the smell and I couldn’t get out until 5.00pm.

2 Comments on Jacob C’s 100 WC

  1. Ana Team100WC
    October 19, 2014 at 3:27 am (4 years ago)

    What a lovely story you painted through your words! Your interesting starter grabbed my attention. Your character took a strong stand against bullying inspite of knowing he would get in trouble later. How courageous! Well written and well thought of! Keep writing.

    Ms. Ana Team100WC

  2. Fiona Thomas Team 100WC Cardiff
    October 19, 2014 at 8:38 pm (4 years ago)

    Oh dear! What a smell that would be.. I hope you are not writing this based on a real event! You use interesting language and keep the writing lively and detailed. Well done.


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