Eloise’s 100 WC

I could not believe the smell of the garden. It was full of beautiful flowers. From daisies to sunflowers, from roses to gardenias, nearly every possible flower with every beautiful scent. I kept walking through the garden until I reached an old but gorgeous swing made from the finest oak covered in vines. As I was swinging, something caught my eye. It was a small house covered in vines, surrounded with flowers. I had a peep into the house when I heard, “Eve, time to go,” I ran out of the bushes and will never forget the beautiful hidden garden.

1 Comment on Eloise’s 100 WC

  1. Miss R
    October 22, 2014 at 2:58 pm (5 years ago)

    What a lovely story you have written, the garden sounds beautiful! You have used a range of senses in your story- what you could see, smell and then hear- maybe next time you could also mention what you can taste or touch.


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