Taco’s 100 WC

The radio announces that the soccer World Cup is to be held in Brazil. Everybody books their flight and starts to pack. Preparations begin. People from all around the world come to airports for their flights. In Brazil the traffic increases and at times becomes chaotic and unbearable for all kinds of vehicles. At the football stadium you can hear shouting, screaming, chanting and cheering which is unbelievable especially when the national anthems are sung. The colour is intense with everybody’s flags flying and excitement rising. But that’s what happens in Brazil when the soccer World  Cup is held there.

3 Comments on Taco’s 100 WC

  1. Ethan C
    June 20, 2014 at 1:30 am (5 years ago)

    Wow, great story! You used some good sentence starters, but could have used more wow words, however your punctuation was perfect.

  2. TJ
    June 20, 2014 at 1:33 am (5 years ago)

    Must be pretty load then. A few things, try to use more wow words and try not to start sentences with ‘but’

  3. jane hewitt
    June 20, 2014 at 2:02 pm (5 years ago)

    Well done! You have included some amazing descriptions in your writing. I love the idea that the momentum and ‘chaos’ increases throughout your work. Have you been watching the World Cup on TV? Jane Team 100WC Barnsley UK


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