May 27

Eloise’s 100 WC

There I was, stuck in the middle of a forest, surrounded by huge bushy, green trees. My heart was pounding like I had just been dead and was suddenly awoken. All of a sudden, I hear something in the bushes. As loud as thunder, the noise became louder and louder, until I could feel my ears moving in fear. I was trying to run away but where could I go, I was shaking like I was in Antarctica, not knowing why. Suddenly I awoke, so startled but so glad it was only a dream. My heart started to calm down as I drifted to sleep.

Posted May 27, 2014 by baker2012 in category Uncategorized

1 thoughts on “Eloise’s 100 WC

  1. baker2012 (Post author)

    I loved this piece of writing Eloise, in fact I think it may be your best so far this year! I just wish you would have had a more original ending! Otherwise, outstanding work!


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