Eloise’s 100 WC

Sarah and Amy were going on their weekly ‘sleep under the stars’ night. They were lying on the lush, green grass when suddenly Sarah jumped with excitement, “Look up! Can you see that figure gliding through the air?” Amy lay there silently puzzled. She had seen nothing. They were both about to fall asleep when Amy saw a glimpse of something magnificent, it was probably the prettiest thing she had ever seen, it was a shooting star. Amy made a wish, her wish was that Sarah and herself could have more nights like these and have great memories to share with one another.

2 Comments on Eloise’s 100 WC

  1. baker2012
    March 20, 2014 at 11:22 pm (5 years ago)

    Eloise, this is a fantastic piece of writing! I’m very impressed! You have used a wide range of descriptive language and made me feel like I was lying under the stars with the girls!

    Great work!

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  2. Sam (Team100(
    March 24, 2014 at 8:31 pm (5 years ago)

    Hi Eloise

    What a lovely story! I like your choice of words, they really helped to set the scene.

    Thank you for taking part in 100wc – keep up the great work!

    Sam (Team100)

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