February 28

Madison’s 100 WC

Lucy smiled as she remembered her encounter with Willow and her sisters.

They were Dryads, spirits of trees.

She remembered the creatures’ beauty, Willow’s long dusty green hair pulled back loosely, her pale brown skin covered by a curling vined dress.  Willow’s feet gently touched the ground, they looked like tree roots as they pushed through the earth.  The Dryads were beautiful and lion hearted. She remembered the battle between the Desert Dryads as they invaded the peace of the Forrest Dryads.  Still smiling, she closed her eyes and thought, opened them again, looking up at a pretty face. She was in Dryad Forrest.


Posted February 28, 2014 by baker2012 in category Uncategorized

1 thoughts on “Madison’s 100 WC

  1. Mr Kilcoyne (Team 100 WC)

    Hi Madison,
    Well done on your entry into this week’s 100 Word Challenge.
    I love the start of your story, it struck me as being very atmospheric and places the reader right into the story.
    I also liked your use of adjectives, especially “curling vined”.
    Just remember to include your commas when you are writing lists (whether it is lists of shopping or adjectives!!:))
    Keep up the excellent work.
    Mr Kilcoyne
    Team 100 WC
    London
    UK

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