February 27

Michaela’s 100 WC

Dear diary,

My lungs are pushing through the earth as I breathe heavily on the concrete. No one is around on this type of night, I should know I have been homeless for nearly 10 years. Tonight is a particularly bad night because I don’t have a blanket and it does not help when I can feel the snowflakes dropping on me, making me numb. Tomorrow night I think I will go back to Edwidson St as people hand out blankets and give me hot soup. All I have left is you and a broken pen I found on the road.

Yours,

Bailey


Posted February 27, 2014 by baker2012 in category Uncategorized

2 thoughts on “Michaela’s 100 WC

  1. baker2012 (Post author)

    This is an extremely powerful piece of writing Michaela and an original way to use this prompt!

    Great work!

    MB xo

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  2. Damien (Team 100WC)

    Hi Michaela,
    Thanks for contributing to the 100WC and well done on a very good piece of writing. I love that you have taken a different spin on the prompt (as many have been about digging). The metaphor of lungs pushing through the earth is a powerful beginning and the rest of the piece has great flow.
    Well done and keep it up.
    Damien (Team 100WC) Melbourne, Australia

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