Lili’s last 100 WC for 2013

There was red, yellow, green, purple, blue and pink paint in dirty old rusty jars. I stare at the canvas with expression. I pick up the paint brush and close my eyes. I was in the dessert, my feet soaking in the glistening sand. I walked for ages; everything had now turned into shiny waterfalls. All of a sudden I see an island with water calling out to me. I see round coconuts jumping with excitement. I feel a pinch on my skin and wake up. I look on the canvas and see that I had painted my whole dream. Something really stood out it was a jar of red paint.

1 Comment on Lili’s last 100 WC for 2013

  1. Carol Newton (Team 100WC) Leeds, UK
    December 15, 2013 at 6:53 am (6 years ago)

    What a beautiful idea Lili; I love it! You need to be careful with your tenses, but as you are writing about a dream it does sort of work to change between past and present tense. Keep up the fabulous writing!


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