December 14

Lili’s last 100 WC for 2013

There was red, yellow, green, purple, blue and pink paint in dirty old rusty jars. I stare at the canvas with expression. I pick up the paint brush and close my eyes. I was in the dessert, my feet soaking in the glistening sand. I walked for ages; everything had now turned into shiny waterfalls. All of a sudden I see an island with water calling out to me. I see round coconuts jumping with excitement. I feel a pinch on my skin and wake up. I look on the canvas and see that I had painted my whole dream. Something really stood out it was a jar of red paint.


Posted December 14, 2013 by baker2012 in category Uncategorized

1 thoughts on “Lili’s last 100 WC for 2013

  1. Carol Newton (Team 100WC) Leeds, UK

    What a beautiful idea Lili; I love it! You need to be careful with your tenses, but as you are writing about a dream it does sort of work to change between past and present tense. Keep up the fabulous writing!

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