November 29

Alyssa 100 WC

Without making a noise, he suddenly appeared behind them, with his large oval shaped eyes and his big white grin.  He looked at them with rage and hatefulness.  With this the couple started backing away, almost as if they were planning to make a run for it.  But their hopes were soon crushed by his feral dog.  The dog began barking like a madman whilst trying to thrust them back to the man.  The man and his dog began walking towards the couple, enclosing them in the little space they had, until he was close enough to begin the process.


Posted November 29, 2013 by baker2012 in category Uncategorized

1 thoughts on “Alyssa 100 WC

  1. Mrs Neale (Team 100WC)

    Oh my goodness Alyssa, such fabulous use of words to create a great build up of tension for your reader. Your last line is menacing. ‘A process’ sounds so clinical and your reader is left fearing the worst is about to happen. But also wanting to know more. Such a skilful writer’s technique.
    Keep on reading and keep on writing. I REALLY enjoyed reading this. Thank you for writing for the 100WC.

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