October 31

Michaela’s 100 WC

I quickly ran and found shelter. I couldn’t see anything because it was midnight. I could vaguely see our modern house being ruined. I turned around and started running through the rain, pouring down just like a waterfall. The violent storm was getting worse as I listened to the thunder and the lightning. I could see the street flooding considering the water was up to my ankles. I couldn’t see my family and I couldn’t see my house anymore, I was terrified. I started making my way towards the park bench. I had no idea what was going to happen next.


Posted October 31, 2013 by baker2012 in category Uncategorized

2 thoughts on “Michaela’s 100 WC

  1. Emily Sims

    Michaela,
    The first sentence had me completely hooked straight away! You use short sentences really well to set the scene of your 100WC, and you use a wide range of varying vocabulary- well done! If possible, try to see if you could start your sentences differently sometimes rather than using ‘I’.
    Emily, Team100

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