Ben’s 100 WC

The violent storm was raging through the small town, tearing through the black night. Lightning streamed down. Houses burned, citizens perished as the rain gushed down. Luke and Ben shrieked in distress through the rain pelting down faster than light. Luke skidded along the wet gravel as the water around him turned to red grazes had ripped his arms. Luke roared in pain as Ben heaved his feeble body. They limped towards the flooded park. Ben’s frail body shielded Luke from the crashing hail as they sheltered a midst the leaves of a tree. Lightning smashed the trees around them,“We’re trapped!”

1 Comment on Ben’s 100 WC

  1. Mrs Prior - Team 100WC
    November 3, 2013 at 11:26 am (5 years ago)

    Ben, this is an extremely well written piece of work. Your use of well chosen, adventurous vocabulary really helps to create a vivid picture in the reader’s mind. I can imagine this being the opening to a story and it would certainly hook me in! Your description made me feel empathy for the characters. This is one of the best challenges I have read in a long time. Well done. 🙂

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