Max’s 100WC

The violent storm was shaking up our house causing teapots and glass from our chandelier to fall to the floor. The sky outside was so dark that it seemed like bedtime at only 1:00 pm. Luckily our house was made out of solid titanium and our windows which were only glazed twice. The rest of the street had tripled glazed which were really strong. So on the storm went. We did everything possible to keep ourselves safe whilst the raging storm went on outside blowing houses and cars away. It was really shocking to see our massive house windows be shattered by wild winds.

2 Comments on Max’s 100WC

  1. baker2012
    October 30, 2013 at 8:09 pm (6 years ago)

    Max, this is a bit vanilla for you! Where has the peppermint choc chip gone? With such a great prompt I expected more adjectives and suspense!

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  2. Mrs DW. team 100
    November 3, 2013 at 6:55 pm (6 years ago)

    Max, this was an interesting take on the prompt. I agree, you could use some more interesting adjectives especially with this type of prompt. You could really have gone to town with the descriptions of the storm.

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